Hahahah

Fuckin great

'That, would be rubbish...'

Haha

'Gah! I hate this family. I wish I was neva born! *sobs*' :)

Poignant

This is an aspect of the human condition that few speak of, or know of.
The falseness, and the social moulds. The expression not of oneself, but of the ideal social model. People are almost robotic in their emulation of the flawed society in which they operate.
Quite a scary thing.

Nice job

Nice

Good job dude.
Work on your EQing a bit, and normalise your track (for loudness). The snare sounded a bit flat, it needs some high.

Otherwise, I like

Dude

Be careful using movie samples in your songs!
You used brad pitts dialogue from the 12 Monkeys.

Not bad dude

Maybe just work on your timing (at 45). I know this track was probably supposed to sound 'loose', but I think if you work more on the electronic side of your music, you'll develop better.