Good job dude.
Work on your EQing a bit, and normalise your track (for loudness). The snare sounded a bit flat, it needs some high.
Otherwise, I like
Be careful using movie samples in your songs!
You used brad pitts dialogue from the 12 Monkeys.
Not bad dude
Maybe just work on your timing (at 45). I know this track was probably supposed to sound 'loose', but I think if you work more on the electronic side of your music, you'll develop better.
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